Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subject, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's perpetually transforming epoch.
Children
are concentrating more on education rather than other activities
. However
, few individuals opened that music
,Art
and Drama
are as vital as another
academic Correct quantifier usage
other
subject
, mostly at starting school. I fully agree with the above Nation and explain with Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
huge
extent in the first coming paragraphs.
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the huge
this
phenomenon, the first and foremost is every child not
have the same abilities. Add a missing verb
does not
In addition
, total
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the total
age
of children
they
learn everything from surrounding ambition and to the parents. So, they learn many other things except Correct pronoun usage
apply
Science
and Maths such
as music
Art
and Drama
and due to
learn
that, they can able to keep relax in their life and it for bright future. If Change the verb form
learning
they
not able to understand Add a verb
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werethey
science
and maths through the talent of Art
and Drama
, they can able to build their career. For instance
, Amitabh Bachchan started drama
in the movie starting to the
only Correct article usage
a
age
and due to
this
, now he is one of the famous
actors in the world and Correct quantifier usage
most famous
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earns
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of money Change the article
a lot
to
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for
the
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drama
.
Secondly
,other activities
aid juveniles to concentrate on the main subject .such
as .maths ,social science
and Science
. In other words
, listening to music
playing games and doing art
can help children
to fill relaxed and feel more comfortable with study
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studying
along with
main
subjects. If they only learn subjectively they can suffer from anxiety and mental stress because they Correct article usage
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not
have any other Change the verb form
do not
did not
activities
which
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have
detrimental consequences . Long Correct subject-verb agreement
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on
main
subject and Change the article
the main
not
able to connect socially. Add a missing verb
am not
Therefore
, for the bright future of children
music
art
and acting at starting age
is good for them.
In conclusion, I fully agree with the statement that other activities
can add miners to make a bright future and keep relaxed
at their starting Correct pronoun usage
them relaxed
age
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