The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The chart demonstrates the amount of money spent on five various consumer commodities (
cars
, computers, books, perfume, and cameras) in two nations (Use synonyms
France
, and the United Kingdom) in the year 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Use synonyms
Overall
, the UK spent the most wealth on consumer goods than Linking Words
France
in the period given. Both the Use synonyms
British
and French spent the highest amount of money on Use synonyms
cars
and the least amount on perfume consumers.
In terms of Use synonyms
cars
, the Use synonyms
British
spent more expenditure on Use synonyms
cars
consumers, about £450,000 on Use synonyms
this
as opposed to the French at only £400, 000. Linking Words
Similarly
, Linking Words
British
expenditure was higher on books than the French (roughly £400,000 and exactly £400,000 correspondingly). In the UK, the camera buyers shoot a peak at approximately £350,000 and were over half of the French (£150,000).
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On the other hand
, the remaining part of the money was spent more on Linking Words
France
. About £370,000 in Use synonyms
France
which was slightly less in the UK at exactly £350,000. The other purchasers were not so popular throughout the whole year and were responsible for £140,000 - £200,000. Use synonyms
To conclude
, it is predicted that consumer goods are the Linking Words
British
dominant.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, france, british with synonyms.
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