Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to get the information regarding the interview result which I attended last
Friday and still waiting for results.
In our company, there are various positions available and I applied for the position of project coordinator as I completed a project management course at Lambton College Toronto. I believe my interview was done very well as I answered all the questions and my written exam also
went well. I provided detailed information regarding my previous job experience as I worked as a project coordinator at one of the international companies in Toronto. I shared all the references during the meeting so you can contact them.
I need the result of the interview as it is already one week and I will relocate near to the office if I get positive feedback.
Therefore
, I request you please share the result this
week.
Yours Faithfully,
LoveSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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Task Achievement
To improve your task response score, ensure that you clearly address all parts of the prompt in sufficient detail. For instance, while you mentioned the need for the interview results, elaborating on the urgency or providing a more compelling reason for the need could enhance the completeness of your response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance your letter's logical structure by introducing transitional phrases and linking words between ideas and paragraphs. This will improve the flow of your letter, making it easier for the reader to follow your thoughts.
Coherence and Cohesion
For greeting and closing, it's more formal and precise to address the letter to a specific person when possible. If the name is unknown, 'Dear Hiring Manager' is a preferable alternative to 'Sir or Madam'. Additionally, ensure that your closing salutation matches the tone of your letter; for example, 'Yours sincerely' when using the recipient's name, or 'Yours faithfully' when the name is unknown, as you did correctly.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. Your letter mostly follows this structure, but refining paragraphs to ensure there's no overlapping information can improve clarity and effectiveness.