Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support answer.

Food
is a thing which gives different
experience
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at
different
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a different
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place
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places
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.
However
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,However
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some
people
prefer to have
food
at
stand
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stands
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or
restaurants
and some at
home
. I prefer to eat at
restaurants
or at
home
as it has some benefits and some reasons that I would
discussing
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in the coming paragraphs. There
plethra
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plethora
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amount of
food
which
people
prefer to eat at
stands
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the stands
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as it carries a lot of benefits
such
as
people
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for people
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who are in hurry and
dont
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don't
have much time,
eating
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to eat
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at
stands
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the stands
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as
food
is served fast. But, as I am a student and do not have
a
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issue
for
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with
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timings.So, I highly prefer to consume
food
at
restaurants
or at
home
.First and
the
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foremost
restaurants
provide us with the ambience
as well as
the
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great hospitality.
Moreiver
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Moreover
they consider hygiene
while
cooking.
According to
research done by
the
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American reporters, it has been found that most
of
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the
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people
get serious diseases from eating at
food
stands.
Moreover
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the second place I prefer to eat is at
home
and everyone
know
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nothing can be compared with
food
which
are
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is
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prepared at
home
.
However
, the use
fresh
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of fresh
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vegetables, the hygiene is always on the
ming
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mind
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while
making
food
at
home
. In conclusion, from my point of view, eating healthy is important, which is
avoid
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avoiding
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eating at
food
stands
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Hygiene
  • Variety
  • Quality control
  • Dietary preferences
  • Social atmosphere
  • Routine
  • Intimate
  • Economical
  • Culinary skills
  • Creativity
  • Inspiration
  • Experience
  • Bonding
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