Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

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Dear Franklin, I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm writing to give you some information about an issue with my car caused by the way you have been parking your vehicle.

This

week, I noticed that you arrived earlier than me every day and I'm not sure if you're aware but all these times the edge of the parking line was crossed by your car.

For

this

reason, I had to pull over really near the wall,

hence

yesterday when I opened the driver's door it scratched the wall removing the paint. It caused me the inconvenience of asking for a day off from my job in order to find a place to solve the problem.

Besides

, a cost of $350 to have new paint again and four days of taxi expenses travelling to my work. I'd appreciate it if you send me a refund of the fix plus $120 related to transports for my company. Let me know if it's better for you to make me a deposit or a reimbursement by cash. Looking forward to hearing your response, Best wishes, Polly

Submitted by pollyannamsouza on Mon Jan 30 2023

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