Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

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Dear Franklin, I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm writing to give you some information about an issue with my car caused by the way you have been parking your vehicle.

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week, I noticed that you arrived earlier than me every day and I'm not sure if you're aware but all these times the edge of the parking line was crossed by your car.

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this

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reason, I had to pull over really near the wall,

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yesterday when I opened the driver's door it scratched the wall removing the paint. It caused me the inconvenience of asking for a day off from my job in order to find a place to solve the problem.

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, a cost of $350 to have new paint again and four days of taxi expenses travelling to my work. I'd appreciate it if you send me a refund of the fix plus $120 related to transports for my company. Let me know if it's better for you to make me a deposit or a reimbursement by cash. Looking forward to hearing your response, Best wishes, Polly

pollyannamsouzaMon Jan 30 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

allocating
allotted space
damage
dents
scratches
repairs
responsibility
compensation
convenience
inconvenience
empathy
respect
resolve
mutual understanding
precautionary measures

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Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

The computers are widely used in education and some people think that teacher don't play an important role in classroom to what extent do you agree?

People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. what are those problems? should the government encourage people to move to a regional town? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant adult. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are causes and what solutions can be taken?

Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggests?