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Nowadays, people are consuming more and more non-sugar based drinks. Why do they do so? Suggest measures to solve the sugar-based to solve the problem.

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In recent times, we can observe that most individuals across the globe, would like to consume non-sugar-based
drinks
due to
 their taste, and it is important to solve
this
 phenomenon.
This
 essay will discuss the possible reasons for
this
 issue with a logical conclusion
at the end
.
To begin
 with, there are multiple reasons why the communities, are drinking carbonated water
along with
 sugar
such
 as some refreshments.
Firstly
, these sugar-based
drinks
 will impact the human nervous system.
Secondly
, these
drinks
 will create many problems, which have been observed in an individual's veins and it will block their veins eventually.
For instance
, a magazine published that
due to
 these non-sugar liquids will cause diabetic problems in most of the population across the globe. So, it has been proven that non-sugar-based
drinks
 are injurious to health.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions, which need to be implemented to solve
this
 phenomenon of consuming sugar-based
drinks
.
Firstly
, the government must take strict action against the companies, which are promoting the drinking of these fluids.
Secondly
, it is very important that people must stop drinking
this
 carbonated-water indeed.
For example
, an article published that the UAE has imposed a ban on soft brews to reduce bad impacts on society. Eventually, the country must ban these
drinks
 as the only option to discourage consumption of it. So, these steps will not only reduce drinking soft sips but
also
 discourage people from consuming them. To summarize, It is irrefutable fact that people are consuming more and more non-sugar-based
drinks
 will lead to bad consequences for society. So, both the government's and the individual's responsibility is to stop drinking it.
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