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Some people think that in order to continue improving the quality of high school education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others, however, believe that this would result in the loss of discipline for teachers. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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These days, public debate has been going on over whether students analyse the quality of classes given by their teachers or if it should
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 respect for their teachers. I tend to believe that the pupils could
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 no one for the following reasons. Three main factors support the idea of do not give to
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 to criticize the level of education. The primary factor we need
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 into consideration is that they do not have
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 to analyse how good is the education
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they are receiving. Obviously, the majority of the youngers do not show
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 studying and they could
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evaluate
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 to reduce their homework,
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a good teacher who
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 the teenagers to be not only more
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 but
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evaluated
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authority over the classroom. I admit that
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 good classes or respect for the students.
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 who works in the same school. In conclusion, I would argue that could be pretty dangerous for
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 generations if they can
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the education
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they are receiving from their masters.
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 the school to make possible
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