In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem? What measure can be taken to solve it?

These days, public debate has been going on over why life standard in metropoles is not good as

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how bigger is the town, there are more companies and production operating. What I mean

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population

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. Comparing with a small city which normally is situated in rural zones, not only the air quality but

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because the number of companies is reduced. A good action to solve

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problem is giving incentives to new companies

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their operation in small

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the distribution of these. Another matter to take into consideration is that large

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average, there are 0,6 cars per person in a capital city,

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an article written by students of a university

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the UK. Considering

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cities

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a place to rent,

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the capacity of

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public transport and

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percentual to rise the rent prices. In conclusion, I would argue that

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life inside a metropole has

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advantages

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with

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Accordingly

, it would be generally advisable for our government to create some programs to improve the life quality inside these

cities

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