Duration- 20 minutes You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: • Say when and where the problem happened? • Describe how you missed the flight? • Say what you want the airline to do? Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

#duration- #minutes #flight #airport #airline #addresses #dear…

Dear Sir/Madam My name is Oleksandr Kholodnyi and I am writing to you to ask for help. I am a client of your airline company and had a bad experience at the airport in Calgary yesterday. I lose my flight

due to

a problem with the staff computer at the check-in desk. The system too long was printing my boarding pass and I was not on time at my gate. I tried to ask for help from airport members but they advised me to write here. Because of these awful circumstances I skipped my friends' wedding ceremony and spent two times much money to get it five hours later. I am going to ask you about the procedure of compensation ticket price and a bonus awarded for horrible service. Please, contact me at

this

address as soon as possible.

Otherwise

, I will have to apply to the court for justice. Best regards, Oleksandr Kholodnyi

Submitted by sashko.holodniy on Tue Jan 31 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

154 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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