Duration- 20 minutes You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: • Say when and where the problem happened? • Describe how you missed the flight? • Say what you want the airline to do? Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear….

#duration- #minutes #flight #airport #airline #addresses #dear…

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Oleksandr Kholodnyi and I am writing to you to ask for help. I am a client of your airline company and had a bad experience at the airport in Calgary yesterday. I lose my flight

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a problem with the staff computer at the check-in desk. The system too long was printing my boarding pass and I was not on time at my gate. I tried to ask for help from airport members but they advised me to write here. Because of these awful circumstances I skipped my friends' wedding ceremony and spent two times much money to get it five hours later. I am going to ask you about the procedure of compensation ticket price and a bonus awarded for horrible service. Please, contact me at

this

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address as soon as possible.

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, I will have to apply to the court for justice. Best regards, Oleksandr Kholodnyi

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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