The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart details the preference of different transportation methods in the UK, the United
States
,
France
and Italy during a one year time period. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that the car was the preferred transportation mode in most countries, with Italy being an exception. Considering the statistics for cars ,first of all, the United
states
and the united kingdom have identical numbers at 60% each. Italy is noticeably higher at 75% and
finally
France
at the lowest number with only 40% of the younger population who drives a car. In most nations, bicycles are
also
pervasive, with the highest number in
France
at 46% and
secondly
in The UK at 30%, with Italy at 12% and the
states
with the lowest percentage at 10%. A motorcycle is only a common option for younger individuals in the united
states
with 30% choosing
this
form of transportation. In the UK 10% drive a motorcycle, 11% in
France
and only 9% in Italy.
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