In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There are more and more
people
trying to figure out the
history
of their house or building. They research
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for
many
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and there are plenty of methods they can approach. There might be some interesting clues in historical buildings.
For example
, traditional Chinese buildings
often
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decorated
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wooden and stone cravings and
pantings
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about plants and animals on the walls.
While
learning the
history
of the building,
people
could find out the stories about those
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.
In addition
, when
people
studied
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the history
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of their houses they could gain knowledge of their ancestors. They would know how to improve their
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and how to avoid some troubles. As technology technic developed rapidly,
people
could collect data easily via
internet
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. They could find out almost everything
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through
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.
However
, some notes and pictures which had been recorded
dacades
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decades
ago might not be shown on the internet. In
this
case,
people
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library
to borrow some books,
especilally
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especially
local libraries. It is another way to learn
history
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the history
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of
people
's houses by having
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a conversation
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conversations
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with the elders who lived in their
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hood. A lot of
people
wanted to know the
history
of the house or building they live in. It can tell them who they are and gain some
usefull
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useful
adiveces
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advice
of
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life and fun stories from their ancestors.
People
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informations
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in different ways
such
as
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research on the internet, borrowing
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a book
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book
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books
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in
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libraries, and talking to elders who lived next to them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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