Scholarships are a great opportunity to gain the study you like. What are the main advantages or disadvantages of studying abroad?
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they want. I fully agree with the statement and give some advantages in forthcoming paragraphs.
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this
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is every scholar does not come from a good financial background. Correct your spelling
foremost
In addition
, many students who live in remote areas then
not have enough financial background and because of this
many student
leave from 10th standard and help their parents to earn money. So, if Change to a plural noun
students
government
give scholarship
to Pupil they can able to gain knowledge regarding academic and can able to buy some academic tops such
as school bag books and uniform and also
able to support their family by
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able to go to other Nations without any financial queries. Add a missing verb
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For instance
, the Indian government
give up to 5% of scholarship
to a student
to study abroad and you to
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do
this
, many middle classes student
are able to crack their dream.
Secondly
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scholarships
scholarship
not only aid students but also
aid the government
. In other words
, many pupils go abroad for higher education by giving some percentage of scholarship
.so, they prefer to live there and do work and due to
this
, the burden of employment can decrease in their main Nation. For example
, in India
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pupils
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government
.
In conclusion, scholarships are not only local
students but are Change preposition
for local
also
able to get higher education in other Nations and they learn many new skills and become independent.Submitted by vaisuprajapati1997 on
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