Scholarships are a great opportunity to gain the study you like. What are the main advantages or disadvantages of studying abroad?

In today's perpetually transforming epoch.
Student
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are more
concentrating
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on their academic work.
However
, few massesopoin that scholarships are good thinking for people to acknowledge study
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they want. I fully agree with the statement and give some advantages in forthcoming paragraphs. To
commencr
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comment
commence
on the advantages of
this
phenomenon, the first and
formost
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foremost
is every scholar does not come from a good financial background.
In addition
, many students who live in remote areas
then
not have enough financial background and because of
this
many
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leave from 10th standard and help their parents to earn money. So, if
government
give
scholarship
to Pupil they can able to gain knowledge regarding academic and can able to buy some academic tops
such
as school bag books and uniform and
also
able to support their family
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some financial aid. And if they want to go abroad they
also
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able to go to other Nations without any financial queries.
For instance
, the Indian
government
give up to 5% of
scholarship
to a
student
to study abroad and you
to
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do
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this
, many middle classes
student
are able to crack their dream.
Secondly
,
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scholarships
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scholarship
not only aid students but
also
aid the
government
.
In other words
, many pupils go abroad for higher education by giving some percentage of
scholarship
.so, they prefer to live there and do work and
due to
this
, the burden of employment can decrease in their main Nation.
For example
, in
India
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most
Pupil
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pupils
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prefer to live
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in other
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other
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another
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nation for
whole
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lifetime
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and only 15%
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of student
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student
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students
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come back
the
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India for their job. So, the burden of employment has been decreasing for the
government
. In conclusion, scholarships are not only
local
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for local
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students but are
also
able to get higher education in other Nations and they learn many new skills and become independent.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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