Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Dear sir, The reason for writing
this
is to know about
compuer
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computer
course in your training institute. As
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have seen
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an advertaisement
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advertaisement
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advertisements
advertisement
about your college and
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am very excited to start the session.
eventhough
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even though
,
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am have completed my schooling and going
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holidays
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without wasting any time
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thought it is better to take computer coaching at your place because
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was very much
intrested
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interested
about
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knowing
and
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operating systems.
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the
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fact, our school did not
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compuers
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computers
computer
as a subject. Nowadays, computers
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a major role in daily
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life
and everything is based on
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machinery.
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busniess
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business
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purposes
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purpose
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most
of
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the
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companies are using
this
way to hide their profits and loss in their work.
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am very much
thankfull
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thankful
if you consider
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letter and offer
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special exception for learning and information about the course like time, fees, days and holidays and
duration
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of the classes. thanking you, yours
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sincerely
,
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kc
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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