In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
When the
product
emphasize
with advertising and businesses nowadays, Change the verb form
emphasizes
this
leads to a positive impact due to
attracting people
to buy the product
and cost-effective offered.
Initially
, many people
promote their products
by implementing the advertisement and, business strategy
, this
is because attracting
Change preposition
of attracting
the
buyers to purchase the goods. Correct article usage
apply
That is
to say, the product
that visualizing contain creative information and design, and also
promoting
on massive social media. Wrong verb form
promote
By using
Change preposition
Using
the
professional designer service and content creator to give a unique Correct article usage
apply
product
promotion are the
good marketing Correct article usage
a
strategy
for seller
who Add an article
a seller
the seller
want
to reach Change the verb form
wants
the
number of customers. Correct article usage
a
For example
, involving the
Correct article usage
apply
professional
who Fix the agreement mistake
professionals
expertise
in Replace the word
experts
product
designing, it will make the products
visualizing being better than before like chocolate product
Fix the agreement mistake
products
that
displayed by the creative poster and posted on Instagram Correct pronoun usage
apply
massivally
.
Correct your spelling
massively
Furthermore
, the reason why people
prefer emphasizing their product
with a new strategy
by
offering the lowest cost of Add a missing verb
is by
products
, it is beneficial since they can maintain their customers to remain buying
the goods. Implementing the discount on Change the verb form
to buy
products
in certain periods, it
causes the buyers not Correct pronoun usage
apply
move
to Fix the infinitive
to move
looking
for another store to buy their daily basic needs Change the verb form
look
such
as food. For instance
, because of
the chips Change preposition
apply
product
offered in Indomaret (supermarket) has a more discounts
rather than Correct the article-noun agreement
a more discount
more discounts
other
stores, Change preposition
in other
people
tend to buy in one place due to
finding the
store that Correct article usage
a
offering
cost-effective prices.
Wrong verb form
offers
To conclude
, albeit many people
are not common
Change the word
commonly
to
use advertising and business Fix the infinitive
apply
strategy
to promote their product
, I believe that by Fix the agreement mistake
products
realize
both of Change the verb form
realizing
strategy
, this
result in increasing the number of purchaser
since offering Fix the agreement mistake
purchasers
the
unique Correct article usage
apply
product
promoting
, and affordable price offering.Replace the word
promotion
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