In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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product
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emphasize
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with advertising and businesses nowadays,
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leads to a positive impact
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attracting
people
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to buy the
product
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and cost-effective offered.
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, many
people
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promote their
products
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by implementing the advertisement and, business
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,
this
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is because
attracting
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the
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buyers to purchase the goods.
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to say, the
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that visualizing contain creative information and design, and
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promoting
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on massive social media.
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the
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professional designer service and content creator to give a unique
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promotion are
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good marketing
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for
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who
want
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to reach
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number of customers.
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, involving
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professional
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professionals
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who
expertise
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in
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designing, it will make the
products
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visualizing being better than before like chocolate
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product
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products
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that
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displayed by the creative poster and posted on Instagram
massivally
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massively
.
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, the reason why
people
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prefer emphasizing their
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with a new
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by
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offering the lowest cost of
products
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, it is beneficial since they can maintain their customers to remain
buying
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to buy
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the goods. Implementing the discount on
products
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in certain periods,
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causes the buyers not
move
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to
looking
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for another store to buy their daily basic needs
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as food.
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, because
of
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the chips
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offered in Indomaret (supermarket) has
a more discounts
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a more discount
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rather than
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stores,
people
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tend to buy in one place
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finding
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store that
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cost-effective prices.
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, albeit many
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are not
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to
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use advertising and business
strategy
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to promote their
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product
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products
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, I believe that by
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both of
strategy
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,
this
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result in increasing the number of
purchaser
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purchasers
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since offering
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unique
product
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promoting
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, and affordable price offering.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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