buy punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. therefore life in prison in a better punishment for murders. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

I would argue that there is no difference between a murderer and a country which chooses the death penalty as a punishment , for committing a crime .

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undoubtedly agree with keeping them in prison . first, because of the

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for all humans and

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, their families miss the chance of seeing them for a lifetime.

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, it cannot be denied that every single person should be commanded the

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of deciding the main and primary part of their life called ( living ) which means society cannot make its own decision for killing them or not . death is a part of nature and as

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call it(a rule) . the united Nations should make these governments stop killing

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because of their unethical rule because

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's breaths because of their mistakes. the second reason is that every murderer has a family and someone to be concerned about them . so it is true to say that if society makes someone stop living , undoubtedly it would have a significant effect on their family too , so indeed not only the criminal but

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the whole family would get hurt in the end anyway. ,

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too many lives destroy based on one illogical rule. society should think about the effects on their close family

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as their mother and father. they know that their child is in prison but at least they have the hope of seeing them in prison once a week so it is not necessary to kill them when there is no danger

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. to sum ,up I take the view that , keeping murderers and criminals in jail is much more ethical

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to choosing the death penalty , because of the

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the living and their families.