Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the necessity of knowing about family trees. Some claim that it is crucial to do so,

whereas

the opposite holds a strong view that concentrating on the present and coming life is more vital.

While

each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned opinions. Without a shadow of a doubt, doing research into a family background brings a wealth of benefits.

However

, the most common one is developing a deeper understanding of the hardship that our ancestors have been through in order to be grateful

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what they have sacrificed

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.

For instance

, In Vietnam, every house has altars to worship their fathers by offering incense. It is a way to remind and pay respect to the origin.

Therefore

, a better understanding of

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family history plays a paramount significance. On the sharp contrary, others agree with

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view that we should focus on the moment and future generations rather than the previous time. Obviously,

family

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historical background can not apply to some aspects of life

such

as

economy

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the economy

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,

schooling

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, to name a few.

Instead

of spending too much time looking back at the past, we should pay attention to the present and

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age.

For example

, investing money in young people's education is a worthy way to develop not only their

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families

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but

also

the country.

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, taking notice of the younger generations is

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importance

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.

To sum up

,

besides

doing research into the root of

family

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the family

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, the present and following generation needs to be focused on too.