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The number of books read in the Burnaby public library

#books #burnaby #library
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illustrate
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 the
number
 of
books
was
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read by
women
 and
men
 in Burnaby Public
Library
Although
women
 read more
books
 in the
library
 than
men
 at first.
However
, it was replaced by
men
at the end
 of the
four year
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 period. In 2013 the
number
 of
women
 and
men
 that visited the
library
were
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on
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 the same level There was an increase in the
number
 of
women
 that read
books
 from 2011 to 2013 about 5500. But, it dropped slightly in 2014. An increase
the
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number
 of
women
 who read
books
 from 2011 to 2012 was 2000. The same
number
 of increases
also
 occurred
in
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 2012 to 2013 In the beginning, the
number
 of
men
that
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reading
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books
 in the
library
was
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increased slightly in 2012, but
then
 rose sharply from 2012 to 2014 to reach about 14000. From 2011 to 2012 it increased by 1000, from 2012 to 2013 it increased by 6000,
while
 from 2013 to 2014 it increased by 4000
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