You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: - apologise for the damage to the item - explain what happened - say how you are going to fix the issue

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Dear Tom, Hope you are doing fine ! I am writing

this

letter to let you know about the suitcase I borrowed from you. As you know, you really saved my life

last

month by giving me your luggage for my journey to the South of France. Without it, I was not able to bring any clothes with me and I asked myself if I needed to cancel my travel. Unfortunately, the plane company lost my luggage, I am not lucky at all. Hopefully, they found it 2 days after the landing but in bad condition... I believe you cannot use it anymore.

Therefore

, I bought a new bag during my vacation but a really cheaper one because I was certainly not giving away all my clothes. I know your suitcase was expensive as it was a present from your mother. I will definitely buy you the same but I was wondering if you agree to wait 2 weeks as it should be on sale. Plus, Let me treat you to lunch

also

on Friday and in the meantime, I will give you the little gift I bought you in France. See you soon. Lea

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Borrowed
Unfortunate incident
Regret
Unintentional
Circumstances
Remedy
Repair
Replacement
Sincerely
Forgiveness
Rectify
Understanding

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