The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
The diagram shows developments which took place in a coastal town over the given period.
Overall
, more public buildings and residences had been built by 2007.
According to
the first map, most of the space was covered by grassland, which was divided into two parts by a main road
that led right to the seaside. At the north west
of the map, three buildings were situated right at the top of the industrial area. Correct your spelling
northwest
Also
, on the other side of the map, a car park
was located which was connected to the sea by the central road
. Moreover
, the car park
and the industrial area were linked by a small road
crossing to the main roads.
In 2007, all the grassland was removed and replaced by some development. The western savanna was replaced by public buildings or facilities, which were a park
, a swimming pool, a multi-stories car park
, and a cinema from north to south. Furthermore
, in the north of the town , a marina was built among
the seaside. Change preposition
on
On the contrary
, grassland was used for residences, such
as apartments and houses. In addition
, the main road
was expanded and some shops were along the north of this
road
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