In modern times, people are more under stress more than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being. State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions.

Nowadays,
people
are suffered from more stress than they used to. Having a stable job is not only a standard for each
,
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but
also
how others appreciate you,
hence
it is one of the biggest problems for many humans.
Nevertheless
, improving work skills can help them come over
this
challenge. On the one hand, high competition is one of
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causes
for
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this
issue.
First,
if they want a good position in a company, there are a lot of
people
who have the same desire,
therefore
a
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plenty of
people
apply for
this
.
Second,
some appliers will not choose
this
work
due to
high competition,
while
they are suitable with it.
For example
, there is numerous research
show
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that
people
who want to apply
a
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job in a good company
such
as Google, Facebook or Apple,
this
position may
has
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around 10 other competitors.
Moreover
, applicants need to spend too much time
on
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preparing
interview
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the interview
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, which can cause them exhausted.
However
, there are some useful solutions to deal with
this
pressure like advancing knowledge,
job
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skills. Because, it helps interviewees have essential preparation, and
do
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not shock
with
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company's
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tests.
Furthermore
, training
also
help
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them have a good performance in their career,
hence
they can have higher salary and potential to have an important position.
For instance
, if
people
are a student, they can concentrate on university lectures, and have good marks, which may a plus point in their curriculum vitae.
Otherwise
, they can participate in class for soft skills,
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interview
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interviews
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.
To sum up
, owning a stable career is the dream of many
people
,
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a
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it has a large number of competitors.
Although
, having a comfortable plan, and strategy is a good way to solve
this
problem.
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