In modern times, people are more under stress more than ever. This has a negative impact on their well-being. State some of the causes and suggest possible solutions.
Nowadays,
people
are suffered from more stress than they used to. Having a stable job is not only a standard for each,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
how others appreciate you, hence
it is one of the biggest problems for many humans. Nevertheless
, improving work skills can help them come over this
challenge.
On the one hand, high competition is one of main
causes Add an article
the main
for
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of
this
issue. First,
if they want a good position in a company, there are a lot of people
who have the same desire, therefore
a
plenty of Remove the article
apply
people
apply for this
. Second,
some appliers will not choose this
work due to
high competition, while
they are suitable with it. For example
, there is numerous research show
that Wrong verb form
showing
people
who want to apply a
job in a good company Change preposition
for a
such
as Google, Facebook or Apple, this
position may has
around 10 other competitors. Change the verb form
have
Moreover
, applicants need to spend too much time on
preparing Change preposition
apply
interview
, which can cause them exhausted.
Add an article
the interview
However
, there are some useful solutions to deal with this
pressure like advancing knowledge, job
skills. Because, it helps interviewees have essential preparation, and Correct word choice
and job
do
not shock Unnecessary verb
apply
with
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by
company's
tests. Correct article usage
the company's
Furthermore
, training also
help
them have a good performance in their career, Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
hence
they can have higher salary and potential to have an important position. For instance
, if people
are a student, they can concentrate on university lectures, and have good marks, which may a plus point in their curriculum vitae. Otherwise
, they can participate in class for soft skills, training
Correct word choice
and training
interview
.
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interviews
To sum up
, owning a stable career is the dream of many people
, as
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and as
result
it has a large number of competitors. Add a comma
,result
Although
, having a comfortable plan, and strategy is a good way to solve this
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