A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Rhea, First of all, thanks for having me, and my family at your parent's wedding anniversary. That was a warm event and we had a great time at your place. It was a great pleasure for me to meet your family and it never felt like that was my first meeting with them. I loved the way your parents hosted the event in a warm manner. My Mom and Sister were not tired of praising your hosting throughout the week. The food was delicious and the entire event was beautifully organised from decor to the return of gifts for guests. I am thinking, it would be great if you can visit my place with your family for a dinner next week. Please feel free to suggest any other day or time if

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Online games are becoming more and more popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online games?

At present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the drawbacks?

Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Some pp prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, that change is aways a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.