In some countries owning a home than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Everyone has a dream to buy their own

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, but, in

this

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capitalized world,

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of

lands

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are increasing day by day. So, I think that purchasing our own

home

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is better than renting

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home

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a home

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to

stable

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in a country,

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, we have to face so many problems. In

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essay, I will suppose that the best solution is to buy a permanent residence to prevent from drawbacks of hiring a settlement. On the one hand,

home

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is the place where we live calmly with our family members, so we need

indipendence

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independence

to do anything in our

home

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.

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, if we stay

at

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our own

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home

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homes

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we can hang wall

arts

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art

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, change areas

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our desires and children can play,

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in

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on

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wall

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the wall

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. But, if we choose a temporary

home

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by paying

rental

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a rental

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fee, we have limitations and we can’t achieve our targets as we have boundaries.

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, a benefit of living at our

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is saving capital which we waste

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renting homes. Not only that but

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it is the safest way to spend our leisure time with family.

On the other hand

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,

proverty

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poverty

prizes and leasing payments are rapidly changing with the inflation rate in most

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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countries.

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, during Covid-19, housing and

rental

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the rental

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fee

was

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significantly increased in Australia,

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as

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and as

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a result of that some residents lost their living places as they could not cover the living cost.

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, the insecurity of living in renting

residental

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residential

area, you always put

into

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the

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danger. It may be harmful

for

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to

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your privacy

as well as

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mentality

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your mentality

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. If you haven’t continuous income to cover the rental fee, you feel

stress

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and it will disturb

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you to

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continue your day-to-day lifestyle.

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, I can conclude that, choosing your own

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has more advantages than disadvantages. Eventually, it will help to make a prosperous life and save money.