Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

Consuming non-vegetarian food
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an integral part of the human lifestyle for ages.
On the other hand
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this
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appearing
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to dip in recent years
due to
various reasons. I personally believe that non-veg consumption should be put down and will discuss the reasons below.
Firstly
, preferring meat can be harmful to the environment. It comes by hunting or killing innocent animals and causing huge destruction to the ecological balance.
For example
, the count of deer in Indian forests dipped by more than 90%
as a result
of illegal poaching.
This
inhumane intervention into the forests is disturbing the forest's biosphere.
In addition
, there are numerous examples of diseases that evolved out of these meat markets because of improper cleaning and lack of hygiene at the butchers' places. A classical scenario is the COVID-19 pandemic which is believed to
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evolved from the wet market of the Chinese city of Wuhan. Adding to
this
, there were many
such
diseases like Bird Flu.
Thus
it is evident that opting for omnivorous foodstuff can cause global concerns.
Finally
,
to conclude
it is both harmful and dangerous to consume non-vegetarian food. These foods not only tamper the living conditions but are
also
capable of creating tremors in the economy by disrupting the demand-supply chain, thereby increasing the cost. These uncontrolled eating habits can initiate a vicious cycle effect on the economy. To nullify these concerns, huge research and development are witnessed in the food industry and non-veg lovers can
instead
opt for lab meat prepared artificially without spoiling the natural reserve and attempting to reduce the diseases that might evolve.
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