Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

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Consuming non-vegetarian food

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an integral part of the human lifestyle for ages.

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to dip in recent years

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various reasons. I personally believe that non-veg consumption should be put down and will discuss the reasons below.

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, preferring meat can be harmful to the environment. It comes by hunting or killing innocent animals and causing huge destruction to the ecological balance.

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, the count of deer in Indian forests dipped by more than 90%

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of illegal poaching.

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inhumane intervention into the forests is disturbing the forest's biosphere.

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, there are numerous examples of diseases that evolved out of these meat markets because of improper cleaning and lack of hygiene at the butchers' places. A classical scenario is the COVID-19 pandemic which is believed to

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evolved from the wet market of the Chinese city of Wuhan. Adding to

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, there were many

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diseases like Bird Flu.

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it is evident that opting for omnivorous foodstuff can cause global concerns.

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it is both harmful and dangerous to consume non-vegetarian food. These foods not only tamper the living conditions but are

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capable of creating tremors in the economy by disrupting the demand-supply chain, thereby increasing the cost. These uncontrolled eating habits can initiate a vicious cycle effect on the economy. To nullify these concerns, huge research and development are witnessed in the food industry and non-veg lovers can

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opt for lab meat prepared artificially without spoiling the natural reserve and attempting to reduce the diseases that might evolve.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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