In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement.

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There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether in the

future

people

will purchase printed

newspapers

and

books

or not. the opponent could disagree with my stand. I strongly believe printed

newspapers

and

books

will be valuable continuously. In

this

regard, I will write

this

essay to elucidate my

opinion

. On the one hand, in the

future

people

will not buy materials produced by paper

such

newspapers

and

books

, there are two grounds to underpin

this

opinion

Firstly

reading articles or

books

online is much more convenient than printed

newspapers

and

books

because

people

can read whenever or wherever if they carry

laptop

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a laptop

the laptop

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Moreover

, in the

future

environment

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the environment

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will be much more important than now, so

people

will try to not use paper as much as possible for protecting trees.

Therefore

people

might not buy them. As far as the other

opinion

is concerned, it will still be valuable for

people

to buy printed

newspapers

and

books

, and there are more compelling rationales pertaining to

this

opinion

. the primary reason is that

people

will still like to read paper materials because of their unique something of them, namely,

people

like the texture of printed

newspapers

and materials.

Furthermore

, many

people

reckon that papers are read much more easily.

this

is because

people

are tired when they read through the screen. Pondering

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the aforementioned statement, it is more reasonable to take the latter view as

established

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an established

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opinion

. In conclusion, in the

future

Although

diverse online

newspapers

and

books

will be bought, printed

newspapers

and

books

will be valuable continuously.

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