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Transport delays and long journey are widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

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In the metropolitan, there is much public
transport
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 out of the schedule, and private
vehicles
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 face traffic jams.
This
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problem
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 is caused by many
people
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 choosing to
use
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 personal
vehicles
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 and makes the road must contain a higher volume of
vehicles
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 than it should. To fix
this
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problem
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 the
government
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 has made strict rules and the city’s citizens should
use
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 urban
transport
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. The
government
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 by law has the authority to make rules for
their
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its
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people
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. In some cases,
government
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 guidelines can be an effective way to solve public problems since
people
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 must obey the law. An effect of the law is it can make
people
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 behave as if they are rule breakers, they can get punishment
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 as going to prison or a fine. Not only that, social sanctions
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 as being ostracized by society might occur to
people
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 who do not agree with state decree, and because of that
people
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 avoid activities that break a rule.
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, the Singapore
government
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 has a regulation that specifically controls private mobile
transport
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, they give a very high tax for
people
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 who have cars so the majority of Singaporeans prefer to
use
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 public
transport
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.
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, the fact that public
transport
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 can carry many passengers makes it one of the solutions to reduce traffic jams. Not only that
,
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but,
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it
also
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 solves the
problem
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 of managing air pollution as there are very few producers of carbon monoxide. If
people
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 have
behavior
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behaviour
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 to
use
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 public
transport
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, it can significantly cut the number of private
vehicles
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 so the roads can do their function properly and reduce the volume of cars or motorbikes.
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, in Amsterdam, citizens there better
use
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 buses or trains as their daily transportation since the cost is very low and there are many routes.
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, even though an issue with delays and long journeys transportation occurred in many cities, there are many efforts by the
government
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 and inhabitants to solve the
problem
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. Two of them are state regulations and an application to
use
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 public
transport
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.

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