In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diasgree with this statement.

We are living in the 21st century where everybody is connected with technology. We cannot imagine our life without mobiles and laptops. Online
newspapers
and
books
are
a
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very good examples for us which
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we
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read on mobiles and laptops. ,Yes I agree with
this
statement to some extent that
people
will not buy printed
newspapers
and
books
and they will use their mobiles and other devices to read them. Life is so fast that
people
spend very less
time
at home. They wake up on
time
and get ready for their work. They
has
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no
time
to read a newspaper at home. So they use mobile phones to read the latest
news
.same with
books
people
like to read
books
on tablets and laptops where they spend most
their
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most
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time
while
working. On the other ,hand
people
do not buy
books
because they live in very small houses and they felt where they will keep their
books
. Many
people
think spending money on printed
newspapers
and
books
are waste of money. ,
Moreover
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so many companies are developing
news
and book applications for the
people
. Kinder is a very good example for us who provide a wide range of
books
in one application. No doubt
i
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agree with
this
statement but in some ,way
i
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do not agree. Some
people
feel imagine the life of characters when they read
books
. So few minorities believe in printing
books
. One more thing is
news
&
books
companies will charge
a monthly subscriptions
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to
people
who buy their products online.
The
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,
last
I would say that our future is with technology and very soon we will get all the
news
and
books
on the internet and
printing
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the printing
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of
books
and
newspapers
will be reduced day by day.
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