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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

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The table illustrates the forested land in millions of
hectares
of different continents in the years
of
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1990, 2000 and
of
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2005. During
this
time the African, North America, Oceanian and South American
forests
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forest's
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hectares
descended
overtime
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.
However
, whilst the other regions had a progressive decrease, the North American
forest
land remained stable between 2000 and 2005.
In addition
, from 1990 to 2005, Asia and Europe were the only ones
whom
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had an increase in their
forest
area
were Asia and Europe. Regardless of the rise in the
forest
hectares
between the time frame mentioned previously, in
2000
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the Asian forests had a slight reduction of their
hectares
.
Moreover
, there is a significant difference in the
forest
area
between the continents.
Furthermore
,
while
the vast majority of territories have an average of seven hundred
million
hectares
, Oceania had 197
million
hectares
while
Europe had 1001
million
hectares
of
forest
area
,
overall
in 2005,
hence
the country with the most
forest
hectares
.
Thus
,
subsequently
, South America comes in second place with the most
forest
area
. In 2005, the continent reported 882
million
hectares
of
forest
area
hence
, 12
million
hectares
less than the European continent.
To sum up
, the fluctuation of the
forest
area
was different depending on the part of the world.
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