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Nowdays, people live in the society where consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think its advantages outweigh disadvantages ?

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The maps provide information about the variation of an airport's current and after development.
Overall
, it is obvious that the scale of the airport will be larger and new facilities are going to be erected.
To begin
 with, entrance and leaving doors are going to be double to two doors for each one.
While
 a café will be moved to an opposite
side
 corner , a check-in counter is going to be on a different
side
 of its current site .
Moreover
, an ATM, a car hire station and another new cafe will be built on the right-hand
side
whereas
 shops and a bag drop place will be established on the left-hand
side
.
Furthermore
, now, there is a walkway to the north of the airport.
However
, it will be changed into a sky train .
Although
 there are 8 gates now, there are going to be 18 gates next year.
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