Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

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drama are equally significant as other academic subjects are, specifically in elementary schools.

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essay agrees with the statement as recreational subjects not only enhance the creativity of a

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but

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them to become physically fit. The primary reason why these topics are grandiose is

because

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it

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assist

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the student

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student

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to become more creative. These activities create pressure on a

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’s

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and they become curious to understand the piece placed in front of their eyes.

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, these recreational topics do not put any kind of burden on a pupil’s

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because of which they feel relaxed and lay more

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music, drama and art,

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, some kids try to make

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master pieces

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that

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can flaunt the message easily.

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, In India, schools are offering more options in

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subjects to sharpen the

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of a

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.

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, the number of little stars is increasing in the country. To add

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credence, health is a priority for every person, which should be taken care

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one.

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activities aid tiny totes to become active and do more work out because of which a

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will not face any problem of obesity, which give birth

too

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many diseases like heart attack and thyroid. In

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situation

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if a

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expose

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himself or herself to

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some actions they can be healthy and get more presence of

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, in japan the number of

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sickness

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is less as

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indulge their kids in drama and to fulfil

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needs of it they learn sports.

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, I believe that

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pastime is an appropriate way to

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healthy habits of being fit and to sharpen the

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of their pupil.