The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the changes which took place in the
city
of Nelson over a decade.
Overall
, it is clear that
,
the number of facilities introduced to the area has increased significantly throughout the years.
In 2000, the highway separates the Remove the comma
apply
city
into two part
. Fix the agreement mistake
parts
On
the west of the Change preposition
In
city
centre, some old markets are located. Moreover
, on the north-west
of the map , a train Correct your spelling
northwest
station
is situated , which is close to the university
. Also
, the university
is located on the northest
, next to the forest.
Correct your spelling
northeast
Furthermore
, in
today , old markets Change preposition
apply
has
been demolished and replaced by a new shop , which is situated Change the verb form
have
on
the west of the Change preposition
in
city
centre. Similarly
, in the North-East of the city
centre, the forestation had been replaced by an innovative shopping mall. Also
, the olf
train Correct your spelling
old
station
turned into an up-to-the-date station
, which is linked to the university
by a trainline
. Correct your spelling
train line
Also
, to the North- West of the train station
, a dormitory has been built in an open area next to the university
. In addition
, down of
the highway, a restaurant, bars and clubs have been introduced recently.
It is significant to mention that the highway turned into a pedestrian walk.Change preposition
apply
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