The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram illustrates the changes which took place in the

city

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of Nelson over a decade.

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it is clear that

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the number of facilities introduced to the area has increased significantly throughout the years. In 2000, the highway separates the

city

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into two

part

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parts

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the west of the

city

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centre, some old markets are located.

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, on the

north-west

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northwest

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of the map , a train

station

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is situated , which is close to the

university

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, the

university

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is located on the

northest

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northeast

, next to the forest.

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today , old markets

has

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have

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been demolished and replaced by a new shop , which is situated

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the west of the

city

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centre.

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, in the North-East of the

city

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centre, the forestation had been replaced by an innovative shopping mall.

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, the

olf

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old

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train

station

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turned into an up-to-the-date

station

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, which is linked to the

university

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by a

trainline

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train line

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, to the North- West of the train

station

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, a dormitory has been built in an open area next to the

university

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, down

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the highway, a restaurant, bars and clubs have been introduced recently. It is significant to mention that the highway turned into a pedestrian walk.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, station, university with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

203 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
land use
residential
commercial
green spaces
public transport
urbanization
de-urbanization
facilities
amenities
industrial
transformation
recent times
comparisons
notable
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The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. why is this happening? do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

People who damage public property, such as buildings or statues should be required to do community service (such as cleaning parks) as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment (such as paying a fine or going to prison). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?