In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, owners of each and every household put in great
efforts
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to know the whereabouts of the
place
they live in and try to discover hidden details surrounding the
place
.
This
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about
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reason and methods incorporated to discover
such
information.
Firstly
,
people
are competing which each other to publish data in newspaper and other social media channels about
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history of the region
moreover
youtube videos
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played a major role in creating
an
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enthusiasm towards the mindset of
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to shoot and upload old facts about the house they are living and some
people
tries
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to gather these data to find the
ownership
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of the
place
.
For instance
in a dispute between the two parties regarding ownership
therefore
the court directed both parties to produce relevant documents about the house. The primary stage of data collection about the
place
was a struggling period and
inorder
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to obtain
such
knowledge
people
started interacting with ancestors and collecting old photographs.
In addition
,
people
could request
detals
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details
through the
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portal launched by
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department in each state and
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insights from the government files and
taking
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notes on the previous building activities and
also
to
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know the landlord of
property
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is necessary. To exemplify when there was a dispute
with
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two parties in tamil nadu regarding the sole owner of the
place
they lived the
chennai
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high court directed the
prove
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the ownership of
land
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. In
conclusion
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showing interest to know
past
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of the
place
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people
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lives
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create a great memory and a look back to knowing yourself
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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