Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money . Write a letter to the local council . In your letter Guve details of how you and your friends or family use the centre . Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community . Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.

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Dear Sir/Madam I heard that you are considering closing the
sports
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and leisure
centre
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in our city.
This
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object is very important for me, my family and my
friends
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because I spent a lot of
time
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there. In my opinion, it is important for all local people.
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, I go every Friday to the swimming pool in the
sports
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and leisure
centre
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. It is very important for my health because I have a sick spine. Every Sunday I spend
time
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there with my family. We are playing basketball, and volleyball and rode a bike. It is a very relaxing
time
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for us.
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, it is a place where
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meet with my
friends
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. To do sport is always a good reason to hang out.
Secondly
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, The
sports
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and leisure
centre
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is very important for the whole local community.
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to me, they spend a lot of
time
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there. There is a place to hang out with
friends
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and family. What is
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most important
it
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is the only
sports
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centre
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in our city
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When you will decide to close the
centre
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, our community will lose the best place to meet with
friends
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and family. I hope you will consider my arguments Yours sincerely, Justyna

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