Write a letter to the landlord about the unavailability of hotwater. State your reason for writing. Describe the problems and explain how you feel. Propose a solution and ask the landlord to take actions.

Dear Mr Smith. I am writing regarding the lack of
hotwater
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hot water
in your
rent
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house.
This
matter is causing an
unconfortable
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uncomfortable
situation
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my family. Since my wife, kids and I moved to our house we felt happy because the experience which your
acommodation
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accommodation
gives to us is outstanding,
however
, yesterday we realized that the water was cold during the bath. We
had
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tried to use it during some hours in
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periods of the day but we had no success. Because of
this
issue, we had to go to my
mother in law's
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house to take bath, but
this
was not only
unconffortable
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uncomfortable
for us, but
also
a shame for my wife. In order to solve
this
problem as soon as possible, I suggest that we buy an
eletric
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electric
shower until you fix the water
heatter
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heater
, and
then
you
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me the money
paied
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paid
for
this
temporary equipment. I look forward to hearing you at the earliest. Yours
sicerely
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sincerely
, Franklin Vale.
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