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The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding
to
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the situation of
the
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River Street, in front
the
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 UK University. I live in
this
 street since I
had
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moved to
this
 country and always
recomend
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recommend
this
 region
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 an outstanding place to reside,
however
, we are suffering
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 the poor condition of the ground. The main factor of
this
 complaint is the
quite
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 number of holes across the street, which goes from the main gate of the university to the corner with
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Principal Avenue.
Although
this
dammaged
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damaged
 area
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 only 50 metres, the extension of
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 holes could be compared
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 the size of a car.
Additionally
, because of
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rains
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, the place is a
completelly
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complete
 mass, totally covered by mud. I really hope that the Council promptly attends
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 demand to fix
this
 condition
ultil
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until
util
 Saturday, in order to recover the standard
life
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to
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 our
neighborhood
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. I look forward to hearing you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale.
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