The street where you live is in poor condition. Write a letter to local City Council in your letter you Explain the situation Explain the likely consequence Describe the change you expect to occur

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding

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the situation of

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River Street, in front

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UK University. I live in

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an outstanding place to reside,

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, we are suffering

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the poor condition of the ground. The main factor of

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number of holes across the street, which goes from the main gate of the university to the corner with

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Principal Avenue.

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only 50 metres, the extension of

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the size of a car.

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the rains

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, the place is a

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mass, totally covered by mud. I really hope that the Council promptly attends

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demand to fix

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condition

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. I look forward to hearing you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Franklin Vale.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

160 words

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