In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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Home

, a place where we can always go back to. Whether we have troubles at school, problems at the workplace or issues with a friend,

home

provides

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us with a comfort zone, an oasis where we can rest and freshen up. Each community has different concepts of a

home

. But which is better, owning your own

home

or renting a

home

for yourself? In my honest

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this

is a matter of culture and tradition.

In addition

to these major factors, a variety of other factors will

also

affect the said decision

such

as the value of land,

population

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of the said area, gross annual income of the residents

as well as

the natural resources in the area. In a country like Sri Lanka, where I come from owning a house means you have a higher social status in the society. It really comes down to your own pride. Even when it comes to marriages, a family with a permanent house will be able to find a good partner for their children when compared to a family who lives in a rented house. But in certain countries,

for

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China. A majority of the people will live in rented apartments. The difference could be either because of the social norms in the 2 countries, or it could simply be because China has a population of 1.5 billion people compared to the 20 million people in Sri Lanka. Because of

this

, China might be trying to save up their

lands

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by building apartment

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which

are

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as tall as the sky itself. But whatever the norm is in different countries, as long as

the

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nature is minimally disturbed and life

minimally

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affected in an adverse way, in my view either of the two methods can be acceptable.