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You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning • Explain why you had to be at the other event • Explain what you will do to catch up Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a worker in your
company
. Your
company
 is so friendly to each worker.
Also
 , your
company
 always holds important events every month .
That is
 why now I am writing
this
 letter to you . Because I could not attend the
last
event
 in your
company
. I terribly regret
this
 phenomenon. Because on that day my friend became ill.She has no caregiver person.
That is
 why I take care of my friend.
Also
 , I promise you that next month I attend
this
event
 . Because of
this
event
,I must show my presentation to your
company
 partners. And
this
 thing will help your
company
 condition. So I will go to
this
event
 on time . Because of my friend home not far our
company
. I regret
this
 phenomenon
that is
 why I once again apologise to you . I hope you will accept my sincere apologies. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, .... Khamrayeva Munisa.
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