Write about the following topic. Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Every
student
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has own interested area, sometimes institute cannot grade and evaluate them fairly in regular terms. Someone may think that every
student
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should follow the same pattern of academic pathway because it will help classify the
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level of
students
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.
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others suggest that it is more appropriate to
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divide
decide
courses
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the ability of
students
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. The following paragraphs will be pointed out
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these
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point
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points
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of
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view
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before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, people tend to use regular or standard lessons to classify
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students
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by their knowledge or IQ. From my point of view,
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method cannot bring all potential of
students
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because some
students
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tend to do art which is not evaluated in the standard class.
Students
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might find their own special skills that are not in the academic term.
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, the children cannot show and illustrate their potential as
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such
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much
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as possible.
On the other hand
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, I totally agree with
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point of view which is that we should recognize and isolate the courses
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student's
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students'
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skills.
This
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will boost the potential for every
student
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to find their own field of interest and maximize the possibility of success in every individual life. From my
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, one of my friends will be better
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he could stay in
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a specialty
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specialty
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cuisines school which is only focusing
in
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on
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Thai traditional food. After joining Suan Dusit School in Thai traditional food course, he is one of the
successful
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people in my life by achieving his own Thai cuisine
restuarant
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restaurant
in
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the center
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center
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of
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the capital
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citiy
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city
cities
. In conclusion, I totally support the latter idea
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many
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the many
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benifits
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benefits
as I mentioned before. I confidently believe that everyone will find their dream if they are in the right place
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