Your friend would like to visit you but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come. Write a letter to your friend. Apologise Explain why you are busy Suggest another time

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Hey Aman, I hope you are doing well. Glad to hear that you are thinking to visit my place next

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. But, I am sorry to tell you that I won't be able to get holidays from my work in the

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. Could you change it to another time? My boss is going on a business trip that

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to another city.

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, I will have to manage the store by myself because of the labour shortage. There is no solution to

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problem. How about a

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after? The 20th of February! An international fair is going to take place in my town.

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, our mutual friend Shama is coming to the fair as well. What is more , it's my birthday on the 22nd Feb, we can celebrate in some adventurous way. If you wanna join us there , so, we can refresh our school memories together. I hope you understand the situation. See you soon. Sukh

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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