Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In some
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should be fair to publish facts about
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thoughts. A different point of view is that it should be controlled .
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and argue in favour of the letter . On the one hand , the
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ought to be true to print opinions of individuals'
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after reading false
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people
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take
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why it should be controlled. Unless it is not controlled , false opinions will be printed .
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will be spread.
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do not believe in the local police in that country . I think that it should be in observation . Because all
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may not have a true view . Unless it is not under supervision , ideas of terrorism will be separated. Inconvenience, most of the observers may be deceived. So it ought to be controlled which true or false
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