now a days modern modes of transport are available still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary era,
technology
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changed the form of transportation which is an accurate and flexible mod of vehicles. Few masses argue that
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cycle
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the cycle
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is a beneficial way to go here and there, but in
this
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fast-paced life mechanism
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a significant option. I disagree with the statement that,
bicycle
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a bicycle
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ride
is not fulfil
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the whole needs as time has changed . First and foremost, in the past
times
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bicycle is the particular
mod
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mode
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of transport. In
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urban areas and in rural areas
bicycle
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bicycles
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.
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,
at
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now in advanced
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basic form of
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cycle
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the cycle
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is essential
due to
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their
significant facts.
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,
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cycle
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a cycle
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is the like a running
excercise
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exercise
and it is very useful to maintain their health.
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, it
protect
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from various diseases
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as heart problems, obesity , cancer , depression and
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dangerous
affects
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of it. For, example , in
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the Netherlands
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cycling culture have a potential effect
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world
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the world
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, there Every people have a sole
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cycle
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the cycle
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.
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,
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cycle
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a cycle
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is the easiest way to ride and everyone can enjoy it.
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, in
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modern world
technology
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implies
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a good source of appropriate.
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,
their
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are
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a tremendous
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amount of advantages. As it is undeniable that, with
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modern vehicles a person can travel all around the world and it
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save
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a
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quality
of
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time. Not only
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land
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also
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but also
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in
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modern
technology
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give
a
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opportunity to
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the life experience. Albeit, it is more safer and comfortable
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then
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the
bycycle
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bicycle
. A person
also
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travel
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travels
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to space
it
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which
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is only and only possible by artificial intelligence.
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, modern vehicles
also
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effect
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affect
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advarse
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adverse
to
environment
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the environment
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with their negative impact
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polution
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pollution
which totally
harm
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harms
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the
green house
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greenhouse
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effect. In conclusion, both
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gadgets are useful for human
being
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beings
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as cycling is
usefull
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useful
in various factors like health , savings and
friendly
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being friendly
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to
environment
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the environment
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.
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,
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transport
save
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saves
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the
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time , it is
easy
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an easy
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and fast
ways
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way
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to succeed.
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