now a days modern modes of transport are available still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. do you agree or disagree?
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this
contemporary era, technology
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the cycle
this
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has
bicycle
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a bicycle
is not fulfil
the whole needs as time has changed .
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times
bicycle is the particular Add a comma
,times
mod
of transport. In Correct your spelling
mode
the
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apply
bicycle
. Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
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, at
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apply
technology
basic form of cycle
is essential Add an article
the cycle
a cycle
due to
thier
significant facts. Correct your spelling
their
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, cycle
is the like a running Correct article usage
a cycle
excercise
and it is very useful to maintain their health. Correct your spelling
exercise
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, it protect
from various diseases Change the verb form
protects
such
as heart problems, obesity , cancer , depression and others
dangerous Correct quantifier usage
other
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effects
Netherlands
cycling culture have a potential effect Correct article usage
the Netherlands
in
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on
world
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the world
of
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apply
cycle
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the cycle
a cycle
Therefore
, cycle
is the easiest way to ride and everyone can enjoy it. Correct article usage
a cycle
Whereas
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modern world technology
implies to be
a good source of appropriate.
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being
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there
tremendous
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a tremendous
the
modern vehicles a person can travel all around the world and it Correct article usage
apply
also
save
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saves
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of
time. Not only Change preposition
apply
in
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on
land
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the land
also
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but also
air
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the air
technology
give a
opportunity to Change the article
an
enhanced
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enhance
then
the Replace the word
than
bycycle
. A person Correct your spelling
bicycle
also
travel
to space Change the verb form
travels
it
is only and only possible by artificial intelligence. Correct pronoun usage
which
Furthermore
, modern vehicles also
effect
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affect
advarse
to Correct your spelling
adverse
environment
with their negative impact Add an article
the environment
an environment
of
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on
polution
which totally Correct your spelling
pollution
harm
the Correct subject-verb agreement
harms
green house
effect.
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greenhouse
the
gadgets are useful for human Correct article usage
apply
being
as cycling is Fix the agreement mistake
beings
usefull
in various factors like health , savings and Correct your spelling
useful
friendly
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being friendly
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