A lot of money is spent on renovating old buildings. We should knock them down and build modern ones instead. To what extent to you agree or disagree with these statements
According to
many people, old constructions should be preserved by spending money on renovation but, the opposition believes that they are of no use and should be demolished to replace with the latest buildings. There are pros and cons for both these views, which will be discussed further
through this
essay with examples.
To begin
with, ancient architecture is considered priceless and reveals the history of that nation. Many such
historical constructions and monuments have stood out in history that brought a representation to that nation. For example
, the Taj Mahal was built by Shazahan
for his wife as a token of his love but, in no time the white marble beauty become one of the seven wonders of the world. So, if there was no investment made in renovating Correct your spelling
Shanahan
such
ancient monuments, the Taj Mahal would not have been one of the seven wonders of the world.
On the other hand
, keeping up the old buildings without remodelling or renovating is a tough task. Especially when those were owned by the government and there is no revenue generated out of the property, such
architectures must be replaced by useful infrastructures like hospitals, public parks or schools. For example
, in a Country like India where there are many religious constructions like Temples, Mosques that were built centuries ago in government lands that are of no use and are either collapsed with age or due to
weather extremities, such
ancient places should be demolished for building modern public infrastructure.
So, to conclude
whether a historical architecture is renovated, or demolished by the government should be decided based on its importance of it in the nation and the revenue generated from it.Submitted by varshar1612 on
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