Some people say that the main problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important problems in the life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are different opinions and arguments about the major main issues in
the
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life
. Some people believe that the most important concern is ecological problems such
as declining of particulars
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particular
pecies
. Others think that we have Correct your spelling
species
much
more chronic issues in our daily Correct quantifier usage
many
life
. While
I belive
that loss of plant and animal varieties should Correct your spelling
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that need to solve in our normal lives.
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such
as collapsed wild
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wildlife
life
and overconsumed plants may not be seen a
big deal, but after things went serious, the dramatic results can come with a huge cost.
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On the other hand
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life
, there are numerous problems in our standart
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the loss
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economic
crisis and young unemployment rates can not be neglected in our society. Correct article usage
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crime
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and survavil
without facing any human suffering conditions in the given Correct your spelling
survive
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. Since the
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life
is under threat, then
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life
to every human nature should be vital
important point compared to other things.
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