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Several language are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a very small number of people. Some people say that government should spend money on saving them, while, others think that it is waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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There might be contentious debates regarding the issue of whether it is necessary for
government
 should spend money on saving
languages
 that are spoken by a very small number of
people
 or not. the opponent could disagree with my stand. I strongly believe that the
government
 has to protect the
languages
 for the diversity of cultures. in
this
 regard, I will write
this
 essay to elucidate my
opinion
. On the one hand, some
people
 said investment
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 saving the
languages
 that are in danger of extinction is not necessary,
there
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 are ground to underpin
this
opinion
. Modern society has been globalized, and
language
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the language
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 spoken by a very small number of
people
 is not useful anymore,
due to
 most
people
 do not understand the language. Considering the statement above, the first insistence could be believed to be acceptable. As far as the other
opinion
 is concerned, the
government
 has to invest to protect the
languages
, and there are more compelling rationales pertaining to
this
opinion
. the
primily
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primary
 reason is that the
government
 has to have a responsibility to flourish to the diversity of traditional culture.
Although
 a few
people
 only know the traditional cultures
such
 as
languages
 and food, they could be valuable. the top of that,
languages
 could be
important
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 aspect of
study
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 of
humans
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 history.
in other words
, utilizing
of
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the
languages
 could be understood
words
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 of the historical relics. Pondering
on
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the aforementioned statement, it is more reasonable to take the latter view as the established
opinion
. In conclusion,
Although
 need to spend the budget, I am of
opinion
 that the investment
of
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 protecting the
languages
 is significant implications for societies.
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