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Some countries spend a lot of money preparing competitors in major sports competition such as Olympic Games and football World Cup etc. It is better to spend money encouraging children take up sports at a young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Expenditures on
sports
 are always a debatable thing for the group of society. Few argue that spending expenses on physical games are vital to building strong teams for various sporting events like cricket, and football which have a huge sign on public image . Every child should learn the basics from
sports
 . I believe that support for
sports
 should be pivotal for the young generation. First and foremost,
children
 are more introverted nowadays they usually spend a lot of time watching unconditional things on the internet.
In addition
, adolescents are like couch potatoes at a home.
Thus
,
sports
 play a significant role to remain energetic. government need to spend a tremendous amount of money on sportsmanship.
Although
, it improves the discipline level
as well as
 motivates them to play for their nation .For, example , In the recent Olympics, Niraj Chopra
become
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 the first gold medalist in
javelin
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 throw. So it improves the image of the country worldwide. In spite, physical games give huge success for
children
 and should name a patriotism into youth,
therefore
 , more and more
children
 encouraged to play their interested sport. Moving
further
, taking part in the major sporting event
also
 gives a proud moment for the country. So should be
a
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 essential criterion for
children
 to encourage them to play
sports
.In general, a tremendous amount of young people engaged on the internet waste their own talent through relaxing and enjoying.
Nevertheless
, with studies
sports
 are
also
 an important factor in
community
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the community
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. For, instance, Virat Kohli is an inspiration for society more
children
 follow them to hard work to achieve something in life like him. As
,
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 plays
sports
 is beneficial for health, because every physical game
have
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an
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exercise so it improves the person's physical and mental health .
last
 but not least government should spend more money
in
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sports
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the sports
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 system to encourage your youth
from
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to reduce bad crimes. In conclusion,
sports
 is
a
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 only way to show their skills to
world
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the world
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 by winning international events and
enhanced
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 their name in
country
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 .
However
 ,
sports
is
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 important because
it
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 provide opportunities
to
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 health and wealth for
children
.
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