The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.

The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
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The pie charts and table illustrate the information about the total value and
sources
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of
fish
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imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
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, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all
sources
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of
fish
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imported to the US was from Canada,
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China consistently accounted for the lowest proportion apart from the year
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, a significant increase in the proportion of
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exported from China can be seen over the period given. The percentage of
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exported from Canada to the US started at 60% in 1988.
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figure
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falls significantly to approximately half ( about 34%) in 1992, before falling slightly to 28% in the final year. In terms of other
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other than Canada and China, the rate fluctuates throughout the three years ( about 27%, 46%, and 42% respectively.) From
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point, the proportion of other
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climbed gradually to peak at about 46% in 1992, after which it dropped to about 42%.
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the table, the values increased gradually starting from $6.57 billion in 1988,
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$8.52 billion in 1992, and $10.72 billion in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, fish with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Import origins
  • Total import value
  • Trends in import values
  • Trade patterns
  • Source distribution
  • Import dependency
  • Fluctuations in trade
  • Economic implications
  • Demand and supply dynamics
  • International trade policies
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