In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

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In several countries, foreigners to

art

galleries

are decreasing.

This

essay will search for the reasons for the problem and find a solution to the issue.

Firstly

, visitors do not consider it as entertainment.

Secondly

, local

people

are bored with the

art

arcade.

To begin

with, visitors who are not into the

art

galleries

and

people

with mediocre mentality can not see the purpose of that activity. Tourists who visit foreign countries mostly want to see the things that they are really interested in.

Although

, mediocre

people

who do not understand

art

and artists who are wanted to explain something by drawing remain.

For example

, if a math teacher or an accountant goes to an

art

gallery, they have no idea about what kind of profession they want to see or buy. To solve

this

issue, visitors should be involved in arts with tour guides who will explain to them about artists and how valuable

art

they are created.

Also

, we should teach

people

about arts, starting with schools and explain to them how

art

arcades are important in our lives.

For instance

, in reading ,activities teachers should add some pictures from professional

galleries

and explain to kids about the culture of

art

, what artists tried to show us in their pictures, and what was the purpose of that drawings. In conclusion, many countries should help their

people

acknowledge

art

by involving them in

art

galleries

and helping them realise how it is important in their culture and daily lives.

Moreover

, cultural hard work should not be wasted.

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