The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the changes that occurred in the
village
of Pebbleton during the 20-year period until now.
Overall
,
while
the southern and eastern areas of Pebbleton remain intact, significant alterations have been made in the centre and the north of
this
village
aiming to provide more residential facilities and access for pedestrians. As can be clearly seen from the maps, in the
eastof
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east of
the
village
, there is a roundabout at which Old Fort Road meets Roadbridge - the used-to-be only way to get to the Southern area of the
village
. Notably, green spaces alongside Old
FortRoad
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Fort Road
and in the South of the
village
and the school, all remain untouched. Regarding the centre of the town, no changes have been made to the playing field near the river, the film studio on the shore of the estuary, Lighthouses Road and the lighthouse.
However
, along the northern coastal line, a new community house has been established,
together with
a range of new houses. Next to the community centre, a children’s playground (replacing the old fort) and tennis courts have been erected, providing more recreational facilities.
Lastly
, a new path for pedestrians is opened, connecting the
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centre of
centreof
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centre of
the town to Coast Road,
cross
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the river
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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