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The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012

The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012
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The line graph compares the number of crime incidents in Newport City over a 9-year
period
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. In general, despite some fluctuations, it can be seen that all crime types declined over the
period
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, most significantly for burglary crimes. The first detail to note is that car theft and robbery had a similar pattern where they both only dropped slightly. They started from 2700 and 600
cases
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 respectively in 2003 and experienced some fluctuation between 2005 and 2009.
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 of the
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, the number of people who took other people's cars decreased steadily where stopping at 2300
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 in 2012
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 the robbery
cases
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 finished the
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 at the same level at which it started. In comparison, burglary
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 experienced a dramatic fall over the years.
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 it reached its peak in 2004 with nearly 3700
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, it was
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 followed by a steady decline until the end of the
period
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 with only one-third of the initial case number.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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