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In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books Because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In modern life, the population will not read
books
 or be aware of advertisements in the papers because technology has been developed and provides a community to read a wide range of
books
 and information on their phones online for free. In my ,opinion I completely believe that it will take place in the next few decades.Each method could have pros and cons and I will state my view in
this
 essay. On the one hand, nowadays people tend to use everything through technology, reading
books
 includes
this
 item and doing many things in virtual space is more comfortable and common than doing that in real space,
For example
; there is a person who is not able to buy some
books
 or information it is because of some reason which he has not enough money to provide them or those
books
,data might are not accessible on that area,
furthermore
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 it benefits a nation to provide those data Without looking forward to them and can easily find them free to use or read.
On the other hand
,
Due to
 social
applications
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 the number of readers among young people have been decreased and they tend to be more active or aware of information and news through social networks
instead
 of newspapers or
books
,
Thus
, it is a disadvantage that makes society be far from
books
 and papers by technology so it leads to less printing
books
 rather than the past by writers. In ,conclusion reading
books
through
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on
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 the phone online for free will be more common than in the past in the next few years and the number of
books
 and newspapers’ readers will become almost zero , which can have some impact on people’s health in terms of weakening the easy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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