The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph gives information about the
number
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of
stores
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that closed down and recently opened
stores
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in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of shop closures and openings
decrease
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decreased
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by the end of the given period.
In addition
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, both categories show a fluctuating trend. In 2011, there were almost 9000 shops opened,
while
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almost 6500 shops closed down before gradually increasing and reaching a peak in 2013. The
number
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of shops that were newly opened and closed was almost the same in the next year, around 6700 and 6800 respectively. By 2015, the latter
number
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had dropped to below 1000,
then
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plummeted in 2016. There was a reverse trend in the
number
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of shop closures and openings in the
last
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three years of the period.
While
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the winding up of the
stores
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inclined in 2018, there was a decline in terms of
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stores launch
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store launches
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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